Huff Puff

Hey Laura, I'm known as Huff Puff ;) Welcome to the YWS! Hope you have a great time here & do post some of your works now & then so ...

Lol you need some good dictionaries!

Well done, Solvalery (unique name, by the way :D) ! Though I found a couple of things that needed to be revised for grammatical mistakes, I believe Ranger51 has thoroughly ...

If they were severely abused throughout their lives (like INTENSE abuse), they may develop Multiple Personality Disorder which is to this day debated on as some psychologists suggest it doesn't ...

Ahh, these do sound like fun! Cardiff Boys sounds like it's going to be sentimental? I like that really. You say you've posted them already? I'll get down to reviewing ...

In my opinion, music helps. Especially deep, dark, emotional pieces :)

Wow, I know this is late but thank you for the review & thank you writerchick :) x

Hello! Welcome to YWS :) Well, when I first came, everyone was exceptionally nice (and still are! dont get me wrong) and joining made me feel like I was part ...

Hi :) Firstly, WOW. This is absolutely beautiful!I especially enjoyed And she who stood beside him Nineteen years of bliss. I couldn't really find anything worth pointing out but may ...

Hi, here to review you :) Firstly, How do we know where to look for this unseen object? Do we wander through a pile of mediocre rejects? "..a pile of ...

No problem ;D good luck!

Hi there! I'm here to review your prologue :) Okay, I'll just begin with an overview of how I found this. It was quite interesting; this can be attributed to ...

Hmm.. that's a much better outline to get an 'interesting response'. Well, with all that covered, yeah I think you should go ahead because it's a good plan and the ...

If the overall story doesn't spell out "Plagiarism", yeah I guess. But it's much better to come up with original ideas which distinguish your story from others.

I'm downloading the series on Utorrent & though it takes a lot of time, I'm sure it'll be worth it! Ken Follet really knows how to write! Love Pillars of ...